Comparison of Miss Havisham

First Assessment 

Second Assessment 

My first assessment was definitely more subtle then the second. I think the colours are blended better on the first however I like the skin colour more on the second. The graze over the collar bone on the second should have been on the shoulder, this needed to be something that I wrote down to remember. Also the hair needed to be pinned back from the face so that you could see the grazes and dry skin on the side of the face. Saying this, I think the rest of the design looks the same and has been re done to the same standard.